literature

Vote Story, parts 8 and 9

Deviation Actions

icecheetah's avatar
By
Published:
117 Views

Literature Text

Disclaimer: None of the characters in these chapters are mine. They belong to Koge Donbo.  Both of these were written a while ago and may not be to my current standard.
What now?
A. Ten-Chan looks up and sees Misha.
B. Misha flied behind a building.
C. Kotarou looks up...
D. The person responsible for this appears.

Chapter 8:

When he heard Misha almost say his name, Kotarou looked up and regretted it. She was up there, on the other side of a large ride, waving her arms and trying to pretend she was falling, which only made her more noticeable and ridiculous, as she was higher than any nearby buildings or rides. Kotarou crossed his arms in front of him, trying to look stern. Hopefully, she'd get the message before Ten-Chan no...

"OI! Kotarou! I'm going to climb this ride and see if I can spot Misha or that creepy Fairground owner!" Ten-Chan yelled beside a tower of some sort.

"NO! I'll go up!" Kotarou yelled, and clambered up a ride near him before Ten-Chan could reply. Ten-Chan scratched his cheek, bemused.

"My, what a strange being," he heard a voice behind him say.

Ten-Chan turned.

What now:
A: Kotarou finds Misha and yells at her.
B: Ten-Chan turns and it's the Fairground keeper
C: Ten-Chan turns and it's a mysterious person.
D: Misha tries to hide from Kotarou.

Chapter 9:

When Ten-Chan turned, he saw the owner of the fairground, looking wistfully at the sky, so Ten-Chan looked up too, but he saw nothing.

"Was that an angel?" the fairground owner asked the sky. Ten-Chan shook his head. Angels?

"Are you mad?" he asked. The fairground owner turned towards him.

"You seem to be quite independent," he commented.

Ten-Chan smirked and crossed his arms, proudly, observing the fairground owner. "I'm to smart to eat fairground food," he lied, looking quite scary. Just then he noticed the fairground owners big... black... AWESOME boots.

"SO?" the fairground owner yelled, before spinning and gesturing dramatically at a bunch of 'zombies' which were watching the confrontation. As if they were given an order, the stared to walk towards to two, glaring. Ten-Chan stepped forwards, grinning.

"STOP! TURN BACK RIGHT NOW AND DON'T LISTEN TO THIS GUY AGAIN!" he yelled, pointing at the fairground owner. The 'zombies' turned away.

"No! Wait!" the fairground owner shouted, but they continued to leave. He sighed and turned to Ten-Chan. "You were right, you are quite intelligent. If I tell you what I want... might you consider joining me?" he asked.

"No way! Turning people into those things is bad and... I really want your boots!" Ten-Chan replied. To his surprise, the fairground owner recoiled in horror.

"NO!" he yelled.
Kotarou: Wait, in this part I'm ok with believeing Misha is an angel?
Misha: Well, it coulds be one of the later chaptas su!
Kotarou: But the setting... who would wear clothes like this outside in winter? What about my exam stress? I just have general study stress!
Misha: Then, it's an Aeyooeeyou su!
Kotarou:AU fic... I guess that makes sense.


8 was short, so I combined them.
Only six more parts to go!
Thanks to these (mostly), I uploaded more than 50% of my 21 deviations in November 2009!

Vote Story Archive, Art and Summary [link]

Go to my journal to vote!
© 2009 - 2024 icecheetah
Comments0
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In